This is England ‘86

Watching the opening sequence of This is England ‘86 really inspired me as to how I’m going to create my opening sequence. There is no dialogue in the scene where Shaun is standing in the rain, holding his hand out, and the only sound that can be heard is soft piano music. This Is effective in showing sadness, and that’s the emotion I want to be prominent in my opening sequence.

And below is the video for the music that is playing, however in the programme it is only a small snipit of the 7 minute song that is played.

Lilja 4 ever

After watching lilja 4 ever, I was inspired as it begins, and ends, on a bridge, much like mine. Below is the first few minutes of the film from youtube. 

Production Schedule

In order to stay on track and ensure i have everything done for the final deadline, I have composed a production schedule. This will let me know if i am falling behind and how much work I need to do to catch up.

The Production Pitch

Below is my pitch for the production.

The Pitch

Feedback

People have suggesested that althought the storyline of the film is good, there is perhaps too much to fit into 5 minutes, and have suggested that i change the format.
Other comments are that the artistic style is good, but i need to be careful to ensure the plot stays accurate.

Because of theses comments, i have decided to alter the storyline. It will be based more around the man who the girl broke up with, and his story about how he feels as opposed to how she feels. This wya i feel i will be able to fit more in without the film feeling like its being squeezed into five minutes.