Below is my pitch for the production.
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People have suggesested that althought the storyline of the film is good, there is perhaps too much to fit into 5 minutes, and have suggested that i change the format.
Other comments are that the artistic style is good, but i need to be careful to ensure the plot stays accurate.
Because of theses comments, i have decided to alter the storyline. It will be based more around the man who the girl broke up with, and his story about how he feels as opposed to how she feels. This wya i feel i will be able to fit more in without the film feeling like its being squeezed into five minutes.
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